Newsletter August 2020
Hello customers
We here at Stanley Organics Ltd want to stop polluting the environment with plastic and so we have made a new plastic recycling scheme in order to help change the way customers buy everyday products.
How do we intend to do this you may ask.
1. All plastic bags are now replaced with hessian bags made from flax and hemp fibers. The first bag will be free with purchases over $50, or we will provide recycled cardboard boxes and help carry to your car if you request.
2. Most liquid products including liquid soap, shampoo, dish washing liquid,etc are now available in "fill your own" containers. Bring your own container to fill and receive a 5% discount.
3.Instead of plastic bags, try reusable waxed cotton bags to keep your vegetables fresh.
If you have any ideas for future improvements on our scheme then please send them our way as we want to help the environment as much as anyone and we can't do that without customer feedback.
Kind regards
Judith and Barry Sampson
Store owners
123 Green Road 07 444 4444
Newtown stanleyorganicsltd.com.nz
Anyway I hope you all enjoyed and I will see you all in the next post (hopefully in another subject) bye bye
Hi Casey
ReplyDeleteNice work so far. Some more proofreading is required. Check that you are using capital letters for proper nouns and at the beginning of sentences. Full stops or other punctuation should be at the end of sentences. Company banner and logo go at the top (have a look at the example). Check your spacing as well after commas.
Really good first draft. Tone and vocab are appropriate. Format is starting to come together and look professional.
Ka rawe :)